Almog is my big sister. She is 17 years old and she is studing at Kugel high school. She has brown eyes and brown hair and she is 1.68 meters high.
She is a beautiful girl.
Almog is my only sister and that's why I love her so much! We like to cook together, talk, dance and watch T.V.
She is my best friend and I enjoy having fun with her. Almog is a very stubborn and funny girl. Sometimes she annoys me like every sister does.
Her best friend is Daniel who learns in her class. They like each Other very much. They like to go together to the mall and party.
Almog has a boyfriend. His name is Shay and they have been friends for one year.
Next year Almog recruit to the army and she want to serve on the artillery corps
In my opinion my sister, Almog is the best sister in the world, she always listen to my problems, support me and help me with everything.
I love her very much.
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Stav, since I'm still having difficulty getting into your blog and editing your work, I copied your work and added my comments:
Almog is my big sister. She is 17 years old and she study(gr.) at Kugel high school. She has brown eyes and brown hair and she is 1.68 meters high (tall).She is a beautiful girl.
Almog is my only sister and that's why I love her so much! We like to cook together, talk, dance and watch T.V. She is my best friend and I enjoy having fun with her. Almog is a very stubborn and funny girl. Sometimes she annoys me like every sister do(gr.).
Her best friend is Daniel that(who) learns(ww.) at(ww.) her class. They like each other very much. They like to go together to the mall and party(phr.).
Almog has a boyfriend. His name is Shay and they are(have been) friends for one year.
Next year Almog recruit(gr.) to the Israeli Defense Forces (You can simply say: "the army") and she want(gr.) to serve on(ww.) the artillery corps
In my opinion my sister, Almog is the best sister in the world, she always listen(gr.) to my problems, support(gr.) me and help(gr.) me with everything.I love her very much.
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