our school and all (the) school(s) in israel usually have extra curricular activites, like going to the theatre, watching movies and visiting the museun. some of the activites (are) interesting and educated and some of em(them) (where is the verb here? - are) very boring.- Ok that's a start. But you haven't finished your opening yet, and your whole essay. Do you realize that it was due 3 days ago? Please finish your work. Daphna.

too much of a good thing

Parents usually help their children whenever they get into trouble. Children often do things they shouldn't and get involved into weird situations. Parents hurry to help their children because they want to protect them and make them feel safe and secure.

In my opinion parents shouldn’t help their children too much, but rather to let them deal with their problems on their own. Parents who want to avoid(ww. - prevent) their children from having to deal with their problem don’t really help them. In fact, those parents spoil their children and get them used to the fact that they don’t need to work hard. Spoiled children can't tell right from wrong and can't manage real life without their parents.

This is very good Stav, but it's not organized as an essay with a conclusion at the end. Please try and reorganize your writing and add an ending to your essay.(85)
Daphna.