Modern medicine or witchcraft can damage us. Modern medicine can harm us because of the many pills that we take, but also in witchcraft there is damage because they think that them strange medication help us like lizard's blood, crocodile dung and pig's teeth. So, in my opinion, modern is better.
I don’t believe that witchcraft can help us become healthy. In recent years the world advanced and use the past, and so did the medicine. Therefore, Doctors now know much more than they knew before. I think that should people(wo.) use modern medicine because I know that people think that in the modern medicine people need to take pills, and its not healthy but the pill helps us feel Better and its prefer frome the witchcraft.
Please complete your essay.(30)
Daphna
Tuesday, May 26, 2009
Sunday, May 10, 2009
Anne Frank
Anna Frank was a young normal girl until World War 2 began. Before the war Anna Frank was like all the girls. On her birthday she got a diary, and she called it Kitti. In the diary Anna wrote everything she felt.
I think Otto Frank, Anne's father, should have published Anne's diary because it's important that people know what happend to people who didn't survive in the war and can not tell us what happened to them like Anna Frank. And also who ever reads the dairy can see what happened before the war and what happened after the war and see how ordinary lives like Anna's life ,suddenly changed.
I think that Otto Frank published his daughter's, Anna's, diary because he also thought that it was important to show the difficulties they had during the war, that was a terrible war, difficult for everyone. In Anna frank's dairy we can see it from a different place. Anna was a child and she spoke like a child, cynicism did not exist.
This is better. Well done. (85)
Daphna
I think Otto Frank, Anne's father, should have published Anne's diary because it's important that people know what happend to people who didn't survive in the war and can not tell us what happened to them like Anna Frank. And also who ever reads the dairy can see what happened before the war and what happened after the war and see how ordinary lives like Anna's life ,suddenly changed.
I think that Otto Frank published his daughter's, Anna's, diary because he also thought that it was important to show the difficulties they had during the war, that was a terrible war, difficult for everyone. In Anna frank's dairy we can see it from a different place. Anna was a child and she spoke like a child, cynicism did not exist.
This is better. Well done. (85)
Daphna
The Case Against Homework
Children don’t like to study after school hours and like all the children, so doesBen Berrafato. Ben is an 11 year old boy from N.Y, who believes children can do without homework.
Homework is designed to help children understand much better the substance that is taught in class. The teachers teach them deferent(sp.) subjects, later she give them homework, and at home the student do their homework and see what they don’t understand. when the teacher checks the homework the student can ask the teacher questions that they don't understand.
Homework is necessary to learn, but if a lot teachers give a lot of homework, the students can't succeed in their studies because they can't focus and try to understand all the question therefore, they don’t benefit on homework.
In my opinion it will be very difficult for students to learn things without homework, because the lesson is very short and the child is not capable to learn a lot in no time and because of that homework is necessary.
(60)
Daphna
Homework is designed to help children understand much better the substance that is taught in class. The teachers teach them deferent(sp.) subjects, later she give them homework, and at home the student do their homework and see what they don’t understand. when the teacher checks the homework the student can ask the teacher questions that they don't understand.
Homework is necessary to learn, but if a lot teachers give a lot of homework, the students can't succeed in their studies because they can't focus and try to understand all the question therefore, they don’t benefit on homework.
In my opinion it will be very difficult for students to learn things without homework, because the lesson is very short and the child is not capable to learn a lot in no time and because of that homework is necessary.
(60)
Daphna
The Fun They Had
The story "the fun they had" talked about two different ways of learning.
In the story have boy and girl that coming from the futur Found a book about a school from the past, and there they Discover a Different way of learning .
Through the learning of two children in the story is learn in a way we are not used to, in this way all The child sits in front of his computer at home when the computer is the teacher, the computer teach him. I think that this way of learning is very different and less good(phr.) from our way.
The way of learning that we have today is very different from the way of learning of the children in the story. Today all children go to one large structure called a school, in the story they learn at home, alone. Our teacher is a person who understands us and our feeling and in the story he does a robot that does not understand the children's feelings. We students will learn many of the same age together(phr.), unlike the future all children will learn one's own(phr.).
Learning has both ways of learning(phr.) have advantages and disadvantage.
There are several advantages in the future school: the teacher teaches in private, school is at home, so the students don’t need to leave the house to go to school.
There are also a number of shortcomings in the school of the future.
In schools today children learn a lot together in the future there is not something they learn at home alone and because of this they are not familiar with various friends from various locations.(phr.)
I think the best way to learn is in school today, in a big building with lots of friends, and teachers who can understand us. I would not want to learn all the time alone, with a robot that explains things to me.
אני לא הבנתי מזה -(phr.)
(65)
Daphna
In the story have boy and girl that coming from the futur Found a book about a school from the past, and there they Discover a Different way of learning .
Through the learning of two children in the story is learn in a way we are not used to, in this way all The child sits in front of his computer at home when the computer is the teacher, the computer teach him. I think that this way of learning is very different and less good(phr.) from our way.
The way of learning that we have today is very different from the way of learning of the children in the story. Today all children go to one large structure called a school, in the story they learn at home, alone. Our teacher is a person who understands us and our feeling and in the story he does a robot that does not understand the children's feelings. We students will learn many of the same age together(phr.), unlike the future all children will learn one's own(phr.).
Learning has both ways of learning(phr.) have advantages and disadvantage.
There are several advantages in the future school: the teacher teaches in private, school is at home, so the students don’t need to leave the house to go to school.
There are also a number of shortcomings in the school of the future.
In schools today children learn a lot together in the future there is not something they learn at home alone and because of this they are not familiar with various friends from various locations.(phr.)
I think the best way to learn is in school today, in a big building with lots of friends, and teachers who can understand us. I would not want to learn all the time alone, with a robot that explains things to me.
אני לא הבנתי מזה -(phr.)
(65)
Daphna
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